Oh this is WONDERFUL. I just adore what you did with the sun analogy all throughout, it was so clever and really masterfully written. And the connection between Donna and Wilf was wonderfully portrayed, her more difficult relationship with her mother too. The ending, after her memory loss, was so very bittersweet, the way she returned so dimmed and they took care of her and gave her a centre again. It's so emotional and wonderful ♥ I just love it!