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Date: 2015-04-17 08:00 pm (UTC)
Oh, meeting with Jack! :D I just loved this chapter—your Jack was very nicely handled, fun and teasing, but also sensitive and perceptive, clearly empathizing very well with Rory's situation, knowing he would need someone to talk to, and encouraging him to open up and get it all off his chest. Rory's reactions were also very nice, and the emotional bits about guarding Amy too. ♥ Very nice! :)

‘Plus, he told me he’d left a plastic centurion guarding a box and I couldn’t resist taking a peek.’

‘He kind of said not to come. But how could I resist? A man in a uniform? Count me in.’


Hilarious! ;)
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