Oh, now this was just beautiful! I love the way that you wove the metaphor of suns and galaxies and magnetism around the four characters - especially Sylvia's opposite pole, and the observation that Donna was just same as she'd always been but seemed so much less in comparison. You captured Donna's and Wilf's story so perfectly.
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Date: 2015-07-09 11:34 pm (UTC)